Let me know when the next chapter is ready and I'll happily give it a final edit. (I'm pretty bad at content, but I excel at spelling, grammar, flow, and continuity, which makes for a good beta and a very poor writer. :) I also love complicated sentences, but I'm an engineer and that never ends well in my line of work, so I've learned that generally, simpler is better (even though it's not always as much fun.) My email's jessicajenkins@gmail.com