I know I said it before, but starting with Chloe's dream was just great. It really set the mood of the fic - we can see how much pain Chloe has been in, how guilty she feels for still being alive when she thinks Oliver is probably dead. Then having Dream Oliver walk away, her calling after him and then waking up alone and crying.... wow. It sets the mood and we get a sense of the tension and uncertainty in her life. Great job, looking forward to more :)