That to say? That to say?? Always of also good job!!!
I loved that we can follow the evolution of the piece of news of the oliver's disappearance, to feel all the feelings of chloé passing by the loss, the will to save face, to continue to advance for him, but also to want to please in person who are dear to her for example by accepting a date with jimmy for lois.
The loss of a dear being is something of very hard to live because for this person n owes advance even if it is not any more there. And at the same time we would just like to forget the moment which surrounds us and to remain to lock into the memories of this person.
To open again to the world is I think of the hardest stage because we are always afraid of forgetting him to be liked and at the same time if we do not advance then all the last moments will fly away. And chloé included it, she continues to advance so that oliver's dream can contnuer to exist still little it belongs to her to maintain the torch
I appreciated the parallel enter the smallville's story jimmy then oliver and your story with Oliver then the try of jimmy (I know it is a big word) between what would have been able to be and what really takes place!
The moment between her and clark was simple but just because she knows better that whoever that we owe take advantage of the person who we love while we still have time there because after we do not have more than the memories for companie. "make it for me,” Chloe murmured. “Be with her while you can, huh?”
Really I like very much your story because you transcribe well the feelings of chloé aptly and simplicity. And your feather is very pleasant to read.
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Date: 2011-04-04 10:21 am (UTC)I loved that we can follow the evolution of the piece of news of the oliver's disappearance, to feel all the feelings of chloé passing by the loss, the will to save face, to continue to advance for him, but also to want to please in person who are dear to her for example by accepting a date with jimmy for lois.
The loss of a dear being is something of very hard to live because for this person n owes advance even if it is not any more there. And at the same time we would just like to forget the moment which surrounds us and to remain to lock into the memories of this person.
To open again to the world is I think of the hardest stage because we are always afraid of forgetting him to be liked and at the same time if we do not advance then all the last moments will fly away. And chloé included it, she continues to advance so that oliver's dream can contnuer to exist still little it belongs to her to maintain the torch
I appreciated the parallel enter the smallville's story jimmy then oliver and your story with Oliver then the try of jimmy (I know it is a big word) between what would have been able to be and what really takes place!
The moment between her and clark was simple but just because she knows better that whoever that we owe take advantage of the person who we love while we still have time there because after we do not have more than the memories for companie.
"make it for me,” Chloe murmured. “Be with her while you can, huh?”
Really I like very much your story because you transcribe well the feelings of chloé aptly and simplicity. And your feather is very pleasant to read.
In the next chapter