I like the way you changed the ending for this chapter - I think it will lead to what comes next a lot better. Poor Chloe, that date was just a disaster. I even feel a little sorry for Jimmy even though he was kind of a jerk - but he doesn't know the whole story. I like the Chlark friendship you're portraying here too. He's being pretty sensitive to the fact that she's still in a lot of pain. Anyway, great chapter and looking forward to the next one!
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Date: 2011-04-04 01:50 pm (UTC)