I really am trying to convey not only the passage of time, but the evolution of Chloe's grief process since I'm not actually writing what happened. I'm so glad all of those emotions are being conveyed and that it's easy to see why Chloe is having trouble moving on.
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Date: 2011-04-05 04:22 pm (UTC)I really am trying to convey not only the passage of time, but the evolution of Chloe's grief process since I'm not actually writing what happened. I'm so glad all of those emotions are being conveyed and that it's easy to see why Chloe is having trouble moving on.
Thank you so much for the wonderful review.